Fiction55:#2

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55 Fiction is a form of microfiction that refers to
the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.

-Dear wiki.

Fiction55#2

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Disturbed

She woke up in her bed,startled.It was that noise again-a low rumble,like some wild animal with a terrible cold.It was gradually rising,on to a crescendo-like a building tempest.And then fell,only to rise again!

"Anish!",she yelled out to her twin,"Quit the nasal orchestra,will ya?!"

Soooo,er?How was it?I'm new to this genre of writing-though its kinda difficult,its great fun too!

Enjoy your Sunday!(or whatever's left of it:P)

Love,

Miss N

7 comments:

Pooja Mahimkar said...

oh.. that was goood.. and nice twist.

Chatterbox said...

Fantastic :)
A great attempt at 55-fiction. I liked the twist :)

Keep up the good work.

Cheers!!

Little Ms Blogger said...

Very funny and effective. I don't think people realize how hard it is to limit the number of words you can use.

Miss_Nobody said...

Pooja:Hi welcome to my blog!!Glad you liked it!

Chatterbox:Oh,thank you!thank you!means a lot!Welcome to my blog!

LMB:hehe,thanks.Oh,like you wouldn't believe :)Practise makes perfect:)

evanescentthoughts said...

Loved it girl :) That was an awesome twist to the story!

Miss_Nobody said...

thanks!:)

Mama Zen said...

Excellent!